Today Moonfish Productions focused on completing our play. We worked through all of the scenes and then put them all together. We ran the whole show again and again and found that it lasts about 15 minutes. Here is an image of our current running order.
We felt that scene 4 was too short and so we added additional dialogue. It now involves a lot of melodramatic crying, which I must remember to bring a lot of energy to every time.
Here are images of the script for scene 4 (version 2):
We asked for some peer feedback, in which we were told that there was too much screaming and shouting in our piece. Our first few rehearsals went well. I have been improvising with my character at home, anytime that I have free. When we recorded our performance today, I felt that I was flat at times and so, I must maintain my characters high energy level and enthusiasm throughout every run of the show. On the other hand, in watching the video, I felt that my physicality has improved, due to the fact that i remembered to maintain the tonic body. I must also be careful that my facial expressions aren't unintentionally scary, which I will do by virtually always smiling and keeping my eyebrows raised.
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